Good concept...
Poor execution... The graphics were shotty, there was little to no story and it wasn't very funny.
Try harder for part 2 my man.
Good concept...
Poor execution... The graphics were shotty, there was little to no story and it wasn't very funny.
Try harder for part 2 my man.
Offcourse it barely has story, it's based on a zelda storyline.
Anyway, part 2 is a lot better ^^
sorry you didn't like this one.
That was really good...
Though the graphics and story were awesome, there were WAY too many transitions. They were alright at some points, but most of the time they were just plain annoying. Please cut down on them for the next episode.
september 11th
Very Nice Matt!
Overall this was very entertaining both content-wise and graphically. There were some parts (IE When Luigi says "Mario's fucking lost it, etc") where the sprites were a bit stretched and what not (Luigi looked like a green Mario at that point). Another thing you could do is make everything pixelized. So, draw/trace the car you made in MS Paint to give it a video game-esque feel.
Very well done ^^
-sandman0277
I never thought of making the cars and other stuff pixeled. Thats really cool. But I don't think the car would look good pixeled. But thanks for your thought provoking review!
~M~
Solid!
Great man. Really great! I love how you put the little star wars scene in at the end. Very funny and informative. I hope you get 100%!
Thanks! You get a cookie!
Very nice!
I'll divide this into sections because I have so much to say!
Voice Acting:
You guys have great voices, but you need better mics or mic skills. Sometimes the voices are crackly, sometimes they are too quiet.
Script:
Random.... I LOVE IT!!! <3
Character Models:
Not TOO bad... The arms are WAY too long and too skinny. The bodies are oddly shaped, but not too bad. The feet look... odd but they don't really matter too much. The faces and heads are very nice! Id suggest you work on your shading skills though. The shade is nice, but the light makes them look sweaty and shiny.
Lip Syncing:
Good, with a bit of work it'll be perfect.
Its been really good guys! I can't wait to see your future works!
Thanks <3
Pure Gold!
In such a short time (for us anyways) we have made a great peice of flash! Good job everyone!
=)
Very nice
I have to say, I was a bit disappointed when I saw it was a "Modern Day" Zelda movie. But upon watching it I was pleasently surprised by the quality of animation and whatnot. There were some very slow obvious tweens that took away from the picture, but besides that it was spectacular. Great job!
thanks
Nice graphics!
But you really need to add some emotion to your voice... I almost fell asleep watching that from the drony voices. The whole cartoon was slow paced and didn't really make that much sense. You have potential to be very good, but you need to work on your humour and voice acting, because they are very sub par at the moment...
What can I say, I'm not an actor... and this was just made to test out the lip synching.
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